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This pit in my stomach
Contributed by
pyro_maniac
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:32:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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This pit in my stomach
this pit of hell
the weariness of loneliness
time will only tell
This rage deep inside
is causing me only pain
it is thrashing at my soul
I will never be the same
It is tearing me apart
alone deep inside
this pit inside my stomach
I can no longer hid
the spikes of the pain
are cutting deeper and deeper
Im on the edge
the mountain of my pain
has gotten so much steeper
The blackness of my life
the darkness of my spirit
I am screaming out
and only I can hear it!
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Re: This pit in my stomach
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:34:50 AM AEST
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i know that feeling too well, great write, really good
pixie xx |
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Re: This pit in my stomach
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:40:20 AM AEST
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| Vastly intense poem, you have opened up, using words as a emotional out pour...I hope they free you from the lonliness within, excellent poem. |
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Re: This pit in my stomach
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by musicisluv7 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:59:59 AM AEST
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I know the feelin,beautifuly descriptive poem. hopefully it made you feel better.
much luv |
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Re: This pit in my stomach
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 02:55:56 PM AEST
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i know this feel all too well....youve expressed well....great write....excellent job....i liked it alot
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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