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Vampire
Contributed by
givingin
on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:18:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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The kiss of death,
the immortal touch,
the life of darkness,
the dangerous kiss.
They wander further into darkness,
as their fate is made,
to live eternally in night,
they hunt for our blood,
craving it, wanting it, needing it,
they survive on us, they could not live without us,
the energy we give to them allows them to prosper.
So in the end, if they are human, or immortal,
they are still considered a predator,
an energy drinker.
Fascinating people they are.
My love for them is strong,
my heart beats faster as I think of them,
studying them at such a young age,
lust consumes my body when I dream of them,
I love them with all my heart,
people who think that they aren’t real,
are wrong,
they exist, they are human like us,
they are immortal in the sense of rebirth,
I long to be touched by them ,
I long to be with one.
Suddenly I realize as I read,
things I have in common with them,
things I believe and feel and need,
all just like them.
I now realize my awakening.......
Copyright ©
givingin
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2004-12-14 07:18:04]
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Re: Vampire
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:19:45 AM AEST
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wow that was amazingly written, a great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Vampire
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:48:15 AM AEST
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Beautifully written though not all true, oh they exist...but they dont need us to survive...but that is for you to find out.
so vivid and powerful very intense wording...sensual in a way...an amazing write. |
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Re: Vampire
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 12:32:33 PM AEST
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| Very good write .. its a veiw on vampires i never seen before .. |
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Re: Vampire
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 02:37:54 PM AEST
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Excellent
You style is unique
and
I'm sorry I haven't been more attentive..... |
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