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The Lid Is Closing
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:28:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The lid is closing there’s nothing I can do,
I know the last person I see will be you,
Darkness has fallen all across my land,
All through this you never let go of my hand.
I can feel them pulling, clawing at me,
I was so stupid to think I’d ever get free,
I have held on until my fingers were raw,
But it wasn’t worth what I was fighting for.
I scream out but you can not hear,
You do not know that death has come near,
You fail to see them pulling me down,
Deep down to the lair underground.
They have been laying in wait for years,
Become stronger with each of my fallen tears,
They count down my last heart beats,
Waiting for me to fall at their feet.
This is the thing I have feared all my life,
Now I’m about to feel the force of their knife,
As they stick it deep into my flesh I bleed to death,
You couldn’t save me or my last breath.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-14 06:28:25]
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Re: The Lid Is Closing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:31:56 AM AEST
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ooooh pixie what you done?!
excellent poem as always!
Johnny. |
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Re: The Lid Is Closing
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by musicisluv7 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:21:32 AM AEST
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awww pixie i dunno wat to say. this is a really moving piece & a very gud write.
i hope you're okay.
much luv xxx |
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Re: The Lid Is Closing
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by MMISS on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:59:40 AM AEST
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| PIXIE, I'M ALWAYS AMAZED WHEN I READ YOUR NEW POEMS! KEEP WRITING AND I'LL KEEP READING THEM. SUPURBLY WRITTEN AS USUAL. |
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Re: The Lid Is Closing
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:13:17 AM AEST
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Very emotional,
i enjoyed reading this,
keep it up.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: The Lid Is Closing
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:01:11 AM AEST
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| So intense and realistically vivid...painting a remorseful picture...so much torment and terror...filled and overflowing in losss and agony..really freaky poem...but beautifully written..with so much talent. |
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Re: The Lid Is Closing
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 10:29:27 AM AEST
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| Really good poem, pixie. I know what it feels like to hang on until my hands are raw. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: The Lid Is Closing
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:02:19 PM AEST
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once again another excellent write....this is dark and yet so beautiful....i loved it....fantastic job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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