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Daybreak
Contributed by
Ada
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 02:22:22 AM in AEST
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The morning light softly touches his face
His eyes still closed, his breathing calm and slow
He must be dreaming of the perfect place
Where both of us can set our hearts aglow
Quietly, I watch him in his slumber
I gaze and sigh; Such a wonderful sight!
To his sleep, I wish not be a cumber
So I too close my eyes to join his flight
To a beautiful dream that awaits me
Copyright ©
Ada
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2004-12-14 02:22:22]
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Re: Daybreak
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:53:51 AM AEST
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Your poem are good and we can all see that you are in love. Good write.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Daybreak
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by Stonedraider23 on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:37:24 PM AEST
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| yea what he said cuzx im tooo buzzed to see anything lol good write |
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Re: Daybreak
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:30:30 PM AEST
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Luis, I hope you realize what you have here :)
Again, great stuff. |
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