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Goodbye my love.
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:06:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Never thought the day would come,
when you would say goodbye.
Never thought the time would come,
when you'd leave me here to cry.
All my friends say I'm doing just fine,
because the smile is there for them to find.
but deep down I'm falling apart.
no laughter can mend this broken heart.
When we said nothing at all
every kiss and every touch
each that said so much.
Are now nothing more than memories.
locked away in our time.
How do I live like this?
Without my lover, my friend, my whole life.
Our dreams and plans dies with you.
yet you sill live in my heart.
I'll never doubt that we were meant to be.
Your love was the one thing that set me free.
Now this broken heart must say goodbye..
and wipe the tears i cry for you...
Copyright ©
brokenwings
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2004-12-13 22:06:34]
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Re: Goodbye my love.
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by redtempest13 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:20:45 PM AEST
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| Very sad, but very good. I wish you the best. |
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Re: Goodbye my love.
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:23:17 PM AEST
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sad... i'm so sorry this had to happen... great write...
hope to c more from u soon
Jishes |
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Re: Goodbye my love.
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:35:37 AM AEST
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this was very moving and emotional, great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Goodbye my love.
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by JenJen on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:52:20 AM AEST
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I am very sorry for what happened to you! i feel deaply! your poem was amazing and showed your true emotions!
It was a really good write! Keep it up
JenJen
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