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Together
Contributed by
EVERxSOxSWEET
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:05:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Take my hand
and delicatly intertwine it with yours.
Whisper to me sweet words of love
and the sweet love we could make.
Look me in the eye
and tell me stories of eternity.
how we'll build oursleves a secret garden
and plant our own velvet roses.
Feel my heartbeat
and how the rhythmn of ours match.
i`ll place my head upon your shoulder
because only there do i feel safe.
Copyright ©
EVERxSOxSWEET
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2004-12-13 21:05:32]
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Re: Together
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:57:46 PM AEST
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| Diffrent but very very lovly. An excelt poem if I do say so myself |
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Re: Together
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:28:17 PM AEST
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very good write on the emotion of feeling in love awesome job!!
peace and hope
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Re: Together
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:29:38 AM AEST
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Well, a little on the provocative side, don't you think? lol just messin...it was very good though...very good
Mason |
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