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The Final Masterpiece
Contributed by
MMISS
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:17:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The Final Masterpiece
She needs something to do
to keep his memory alive.
The grief that's in her heart
has got control of her life.
She lost him, when last spring
turned into summer.
He tried so hard to hang on
oh but, the sickness was stronger.
She said," please Lord help me."
I dont want to forget,
the greatest love i ever had.
and no, i have no regrets.
So she said, "I'll just paint a picture
of how it used to be.
When we thought all we ever had, was time,
for makin memories."
Well her hand picks up the brush
and she dips it in the paint,
as she creates her masterpiece,
her heart's feelin so much pain.
Now, she made that final stroke
of the masterpiece.
She steps back, to take a look,
at this picture memory.
She said, "please Lord help me
I dont want to forget,
the greatest love I ever had.
and no, I have no regrets.
So she said, "I'll just paint a picture
of how it used to be.
when we thought all we ever had, was time,
for makin memories.
With her eyes filled with tears,
she looks at the picture of him,
and then she smiles as the grief subsides,
lookin' at the final masterpiece.
Oh she smiles as the grief subsides,
lookin' at the final masterpiece.
Copyright ©
MMISS
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2004-12-13 19:17:12]
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Re: The Final Masterpiece
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:31:32 PM AEST
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Great touching write But the Masterpiece is never finished as long as you can countiune to write and remember the love that was given.
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Re: The Final Masterpiece
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by DanishPoet on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 03:28:24 AM AEST
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Great work.
Remember that when everything is gone, all you got left is yourself and your memmories.
Toke |
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