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here I am
Contributed by
Deathly_Rose
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:08:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Here I am,
Within this world so cruel,
Keep me here,
And fear what I may do.
Here I am,
Among this crowd so large,
Can you see me?
Can you hear me scream?
Here I am,
Sitting beside you,
You look towards me,
But cannot see.
Sitting on a cold bench,
Slitting my wrist,
People walk by,
Slowly I am slitting inch by inch.
A drop of blood falls towards the ground,
Sitting alone, I begin to slit again.
Beside you I continue,
Yet you do not notice.
The pains that I’ve been through,
Not being seen,
Are taking over my body and mind,
It all just seems so obscene.
Here I am,
Standing alone,
Nobody to hear me scream, to see me cry:
The only time that I feel I’m alive.
Copyright ©
Deathly_Rose
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2004-12-13 19:08:13]
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Re: here I am
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by neglected1 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:10:48 PM AEST
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Ouch this was very painful... great imagery though... it painted a very dark picture but you write so well... i just hope your not the one feeling like this.. and if so i wish you the best of luck..
~neglected1~
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Re: here I am
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:36:29 PM AEST
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So much sadness written within. Well we are here to hear your screams we here at YPDC Will never leave you standing all alone. You will always have us. Just never give up hope.
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Re: here I am
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by Dusty on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:58:31 PM AEST
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Very sad, yet powerful write.
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Re: here I am
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by BabyFacedAngel2010 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:33:26 PM AEST
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I feel that way EVERYDAY so I see your point of view Great Write...Read some of mine...
BabyFacedAngel2010
Nikki
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Re: here I am
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by hot-shot on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 12:19:59 AM AEST
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very sad...but u hav written very well ...but ur last stanza is wonderful..
Here I am,
Standing alone,
Nobody to hear me scream, to see me cry:
The only time that I feel I’m alive.
wish u gud luck
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Re: here I am
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:41:16 AM AEST
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powerful, sad and very moving,
pixie xx |
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Re: here I am
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by pyro_maniac on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:22:26 AM AEST
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hey hey hun! once again u have managed to write an amazing poem!? such emotion put into this one as all your others!!
~pyro |
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Re: here I am
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:24:12 AM AEST
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Wow, very sad....
great write!
But my darling alicia, I love you,
I hear your screams, I help you through your trouble times, as you do with me.
I love you
MUAH
Forever....and I mean FOREVER friends |
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Re: here I am
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:21:42 PM AEST
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