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MISS YOU FOREVER
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:06:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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we met and you made me complete.
we loved and you made me feel real.
we cried after the big fight
we kissed, made love, till dawn's first light.
you showed me love like none before.
you held me so tight, i couldn't ask for more.
you made my life better, you made me heal,
now with out you i can't deal...
i wasn't ready the day i got the call.
could i move not at all.
my legs were like rubber,
my heart turned to glass..
The man's voice played in my head
I drove so fast, remembering the past
how was i to know love wouldn't last...
i wil miss you until the day i die..
i will miss you till the end..
you my best friend
All they said was you had a fall
I wasn't ready for what i saw.
you laid there lifeless,
your hands were as cold as ice...
The nurses so ------- nice.
Nothing good was expected i was a mess.
This was loves final test.
I know I had to be strong,
yet i was hard they had to be wrong.
One year ago today.
i held your hand as you slipped away,
Slowly even more each passing day,
Fighting all the while,
your longest yet final mile.
i will miss you forever...
my life has a chance....
in my dreams each night we shall dance,
until we are joined again
for death does not say when love ends,
Copyright ©
brokenwings
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2004-12-13 19:06:59]
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Re: MISS YOU FOREVER
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:40:57 PM AEST
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Love is an enteral flame that never dies you shall always remaine loved. Great write.
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Re: MISS YOU FOREVER
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by weepingprophet on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:51:02 PM AEST
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these words are your slaves. You shaped them and made them your own, it was as if i was seeing something i had never seen before in the most ledgible and familiar words. I was captivated until the end and felt the presence of the lost. I don't know if this is a fictional poem but it was bound so tightly to your soul that i felt it in mine.
~the difference you make in the world is measured one life at a time~weepingprophet
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Re: MISS YOU FOREVER
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 12:48:53 PM AEST
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Glad you reposted..this is sad..and so beautiful..
Jenni |
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