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The man who hides
Contributed by
pleasure_is_pain103
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:56:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Before the day
We were ignorant and conceited
But then someone made us feel,
We could be defeated.
Right on our homeland,
We were attacked
By a man who believed
We couldn't strike back
It took so much
For America to come together.
For our freedom bird,
Had lost his feathers.
But still he flies high
Hunting America's prey
Never quitting
Until our enemy pays
Together we fell,
But united we'll stand
To defend our homes,
Our family and our land
We'll put our differences aside
And together we'll find
The man who can only hide
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Re: The man who hides
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by MMISS on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:31:20 PM AEST
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| THIS IS A WONDERFUL POEM ABOUT AMERICA! FIVE STARS!!!! YOU REALLY TOLD THE STORY HERE. YOU SHOULD BE VERY PROUD OF THIS WRITE. THANKS FOR WRITING IT. |
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Re: The man who hides
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:43:41 PM AEST
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So true so true run and hide run and hide. Little man we are united and strounger. GREAT WRITE 5 STARTS.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: The man who hides
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:41:15 PM AEST
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| Good write. I wish our President felt the same way; though. He wants to take all soldiers out of Afghanistan by the end of 2005. Osama bin Forgotten to some, but fortunately not all. Keep up the good work. |
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