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CAN YOU
Contributed by
lemmen
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:56:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Can you smell it the ocean's breeze
That warm sweet sent
That was made for you and me.
Can you taste it
Fall upon your lip's
It's a salty taste but pleasing
nonetheless.
Can you hear it
As it specks in riddles and rimes
Dancing in the air with no real earthy care.
Can you see it coming into view
far off in the distance
All the love that
I have for you.
Can you touch it
Here it is my heart given freely
of my own free will to you.
Can you love me as I love you
For better or for worst
In sickness as in health
Till death do us part
Shall my love be for thee
For I give you my all
unselfishly
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
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2004-12-13 18:56:08]
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Re: CAN YOU
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by DesolantDreamer on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:13:40 PM AEST
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| ecellent. |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by neglected1 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:13:59 PM AEST
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you wrote this so beautifuly ... i enjoyed reading this.. one of the better things i have read lately... sigh.. yes, yes it was an amazingly beautiful write..
~neglected1~ |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by MMISS on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:19:14 PM AEST
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| so sweet! nice love poem. good job!!!! |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by Dusty on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:01:18 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. Love is a wonderful...if confusing feeling.
~Dusty~ |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by witch_derna on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 12:44:24 AM AEST
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Till death do us part........
And even after, I love you baby.
MaDonna
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Re: CAN YOU
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:34:59 AM AEST
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Another beautiful poem.. I enjoy reading different types of poems from you. Love is such a beautiful yet deadly thing.
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