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I shed a tear
Contributed by
jadedtrust
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:50:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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My heart grew heavy with what I saw today,
I almost lost the strength to turn and walk away.
You see the sight that I saw was nothing out of the ordinary,
just a father with his daughter,
he was reading her a story.
I wish I would have gotton the chance to know you,
and all the things I like to do, which you like to do too.
What color did your eyes change when you were sad,
and how did you feel the the first time you
heard me say "Dad"?
Would you have heald my hand when I had a nightmare?
Would you have laughed at those pink pajamas
I thought I always had to wear?
You see it's for you today I shed a tear,
for forgetting what I do remember has lately
become my biggest fear.
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Re: I shed a tear
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by Luinil on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:55:25 PM AEST
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| aw i'm so sorry you lost your father when you were young, but the poem is really beautiful * |
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Re: I shed a tear
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by Artemis03 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:05:07 PM AEST
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| This write is beautiful.so very touching. I can relate and fell this poem.....because I just recently lost someone close to me too. |
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Re: I shed a tear
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by greeneyes on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:47:07 PM AEST
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This hit a nerve in me and made me cry. You were so young to loose a parent. But remember you will never forget everything about your dad. There is one special little thing that will live in your heart everyday that you live, that is you are his child a part of him. That you will always have and hold onto, and this will keep your memory alive. This is very touching.
Nancy |
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Re: I shed a tear
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 12:41:06 PM AEST
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This is really touching and I am so sorry for your loss....
Hugs
Jenni |
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