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Illusion
Contributed by
Artemis03
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:35:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The smile, the laughter,
It's an illusion
Really i'm hurt, and i'm crying.
Sorry for the confusion.
Day to day
The girl you think is happy
Really isn't, when night comes by
is that same girl who is crying.
It's an lllusion
Not what it appear to be.
Deep inside where my heart is breaking
more and more that I live
So I ask upon the stars
What was I did
To deserve all this.
Copyright ©
Artemis03
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2004-12-13 17:35:41]
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Re: Illusion
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by Apolla on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:39:03 PM AEST
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| You and me are on the same side of the spectrum hon. I know you would never think Apolla felt the exact same way but...yes we are going through it together. Beautiful write. |
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Re: Illusion
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by Luinil on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:02:47 PM AEST
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| very unique and beautiful wording* |
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Re: Illusion
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by athena on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:02:28 PM AEST
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i know how it is putting on
a happy face for the world.
i can really identify...beautiful
poem...
*athena
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Re: Illusion
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by redtempest13 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:22:21 PM AEST
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| I think it is a very good poem. I posted one that is similar, so I understand. |
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