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The Tenth Note
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 04:38:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I watched the clock
Turn to ten
While dwelling forever
In this world of sin
Felled by love
Proven by fire
To be with her
Is a desperate desire
The digital red
Like captured eyes
Reflects the time
I watched me die
I was rebirthed
Breathed again
Just as the clock
Struck the note of ten
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2004-12-13 16:38:52]
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Re: The Tenth Note
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 04:47:57 PM AEST
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This is great. There's just no color like "digital red". I like that!
Blessings. |
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Re: The Tenth Note
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 04:53:55 PM AEST
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| this rocks on every possible level! Great job. |
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Re: The Tenth Note
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 02:58:01 AM AEST
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| this is very very good, i am glad you have someone like her, never take it for granted. what can i say mason, another terrific write by one of my favorite modern poets. dandy like candy!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: The Tenth Note
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:12:33 PM AEST
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| This is great. It's so full of love. Nice work. |
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