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digging in the hole
Contributed by
in2thetwilightzone2
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:58:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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when i need some help,
when i need a rope to help me out the hole,
when i need to drop the shovel,
i realise this is my slave like assignment,
i cannot quit the trial,
i cannot runaway,
i would surely die of cowardice,
and would dig the hole deeper everyday,
i had a vision,
a ribbon around my heart,
but a quick blow from the spade,
and the ribbon splits apart...
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Re: digging in the hole
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by Jakenstein on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 03:47:54 PM AEST
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| Wow....you are a really good poet....i enjoyed reading this....i can relate to it so well....you really know how to put your feelings to words....nice job |
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Re: digging in the hole
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by flamingblade on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 03:42:29 PM AEST
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| This was really good.I can definitely relate.Keep writing like this and you will go far! |
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