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Suicide
Contributed by
Makeshift_2134
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:13:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As I sit , I think and stare
Is what i'm seeing really there?
Thoughts racing through my head.
Killing me slowly. Can't tell if I'm dead.
Inside i'm torn, dead and screaming.
Tortured by reality. There's no point to being.
I'll never be happy. I'll never be free.
I'll never see what others see.
I take a blade. I cut and slice.
My pain is leaving with the knife.
As each cut, I do make.
My hands start to tremble and shake.
I always thought suicide was wrong.
I now see a sweet black song,
The itching on my wrist is pleasured with a blade.
Everything fades. There's only pain.
Just leave me be. Dig my grave.
Theres nothing left of me, that's worth being saved.
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Makeshift_2134
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2004-12-13 14:13:32]
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Re: Suicide
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:15:51 PM AEST
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wow that was brilliant, deep and dark,
pixie xx |
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Re: Suicide
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:58:32 PM AEST
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this is amazing.....i know this feeling so well....if u ever want to talk PM me sometime....great write.,....excellent job
Lots of Love
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Re: Suicide
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by Apolla on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 04:57:48 PM AEST
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| I love this poem, it's like you wrote it with me in mind. PM me sometime. |
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Re: Suicide
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by Dusty on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:04:28 PM AEST
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You conveyed feeling very well in this poem. I think alot of us here experience or have experienced this, even tho we don't all write about it. Great write.
~Dusty~ |
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