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The Dark Room
Contributed by
sean88
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:08:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Grounded in a life of confusion
I’m in a trace with no solution,
I’m locked in a room without the key
The walls are dark and floor is filthy,
Condensed depression fills the air
My emotions are moving but going nowhere,
Trapped in this suffocating dark room
I need an escape or this is my doom,
Scratching at a door shut by pain
I need to get out so I’ll try again,
I’d ask for help if I wasn’t alone
But it’s too late for me to atone,
My fingers bleed it spells the end
I’m joined by death and I can’t defend…
Copyright ©
sean88
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2004-12-13 14:08:27]
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Re: The Dark Room
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:09:13 PM AEST
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a good dark write, well done
pixie xx |
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Re: The Dark Room
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by MakeShift_2134 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:16:43 PM AEST
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| I rather enjoyed your metaphors. Well done |
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Re: The Dark Room
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by briefcircle on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:29:40 PM AEST
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| i really love this poem. very well written :) |
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Re: The Dark Room
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 03:01:04 PM AEST
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this is great....i loved it....excellent work
Lots of Love
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