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Hush My Baby
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:15:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hush my baby please don’t cry,
Hearing your weeps makes my soul die,
Seeing your tears fall makes me blue,
I know that it is me who has done this to you.
I want to wrap you up inside my soul,
Protect you like a horse would protect her foal,
Keep you safe; stroke your head as you fall asleep,
Forever in my heart you I will keep.
If I could turn back time then I would,
Change the bad words replace them with good,
Turn the row into a tirade of kisses,
To see your heart smile is what mine misses.
I whisper words of love into your ear,
Try to bandage up the damage of my words spear,
I will sit by your side until you fully heal,
Across your heart I will then place my seal.
One that can’t be seen but is so strong,
It will stay with you all your life long,
Hush my baby please don’t weep,
I will love you, love you to sleep.
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pixie
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2004-12-13 11:15:27]
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Re: Hush My Baby
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:28:33 AM AEST
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heavenly beautifull.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Hush My Baby
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by Necromant on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:13:48 PM AEST
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| So caring and radiating love. Great write. Keep it up. |
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Re: Hush My Baby
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by Luinil on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:02:14 PM AEST
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| aw very beautiful as always * |
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Re: Hush My Baby
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by Magic on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:18:42 PM AEST
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| I liked the poem but it made me think of an abused child |
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Re: Hush My Baby
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by Mangs on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:40:41 PM AEST
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loved this one...very different from your other poems...
Umang. |
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Re: Hush My Baby
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:16:48 PM AEST
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good work pix well done.
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Re: Hush My Baby
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 01:26:22 AM AEST
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ahh so beautifully written. I wish I could
rhyme like you just did in this poem that takes
talent! A very lovely poem, but I think I'll shut
up and go read it again.
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Re: Hush My Baby
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:26:10 PM AEST
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So caring and beautiful write
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