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Wishing....
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:30:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I’m going mad and temporally insane
Without you beside me is like living in vane
You’re the air that I breathe and not having you around,
Is like a bird in its cage not uttering a sound
It’s no fun to live my life
Without you here just feels like strife
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SweetRhythm
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2004-12-13 10:30:29]
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Re: Wishing....
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by Artemis03 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:17:55 PM AEST
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| Flowingly beautiful. Lovely Write. Keep on writing...always |
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Re: Wishing....
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:39:50 AM AEST
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Very good writing here. I'm trying to do some catch up but don't think I could ever get caught up the way I want.
Awesome work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Wishing....
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:31:14 PM AEST
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awww! hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Wishing....
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by Glo on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:10:29 AM AEST
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Something that I can relate too. Very straight forward and to the point. Sometimes wishes do come true. My best to you.
Glo! |
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