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death doesnt know
Contributed by
bluebird
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:15:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Death doesn't know age
its just a number on a stone.
Death doesn't know names
just written on something cold
and the shoutings when loved ones wake alone.
Death doesn't know love
just memories from stories told
by loved ones left to grieve alone.
Death doesn't know patience
it takes when it has urges.
Death doesn't know loneliness
it comes in numbers.
Death doesn't know tears
for it too cries alone.
Death doesn't know innocence
it takes the angels, even the littlest.
so many things death doesn't know
so many times it has come knockin at my door
One day I will let it in
and share with it, teach it, let it know
all the things it still doesn't know.
I will give Death the dates,
the times
the places
of all the loved ones,
it has taken
I will share with Death
every name
of every soul,
it took before their time.
I will give the tears,
it has caused
I will let Death know
even though it may not feel
those it takes from,
is the worst steal.
I will look Death in the eyes
and beg for it to stop
afterall, with so many lost
heaven is getting full.
But all of these things, Death still doesn't know..
Copyright ©
bluebird
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2004-12-13 07:15:04]
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Re: death doesnt know
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:17:29 AM AEST
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a very sad write, written well
pixie xx |
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Re: death doesnt know
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by musicisluv7 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:47:00 AM AEST
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wonderful write, i can really relate.death leaves one in pain but theres sunshine after rain.wow i think im on the verge of rytin.
much luv |
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Re: death doesnt know
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:28:13 AM AEST
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Great write very well written death doesnt know. But she still comes for all of our love ones.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: death doesnt know
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by Dandy on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 10:11:51 AM AEST
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| Losing loved ones is at the back of all of our minds....this poem faces that uncomfortable feeling.....brilliant |
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