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Save Me
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:21:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Save me from the rotting corpse,
That appears to me riding his horse,
He rides over my soul it hurts so much,
I can’t escape now I’m within his clutch.
I scream I bleed I am rotting in his breath,
Save me soon or there will be nothing left,
He laughs which pierces my lungs,
To my sanity this demon has clung.
His face masked underneath a dark cloak,
But the stench he gives off makes me choke,
His fingers have no flesh left on the bones,
He speaks in such a haunting & eerie tone.
I feel myself freeze as he approaches,
Inside his chest crawl a thousand cockroaches,
Worms, maggots have ravaged his torso,
In his eye sockets there lays an evil glow.
Out to me with his skeletal figure he reaches,
I can feel his wanting as this demon screeches,
Wanting me for his dark & sexual needs,
Inside me his little spawns he wants to breed.
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pixie
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2004-12-13 06:21:53]
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Re: Save Me
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by witch_derna on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:28:52 AM AEST
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Oh I like this one :) I'm sure Dennis will to lol he likes them dark.
But seriously this is a great write.
Blessings.
MaDonna |
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Re: Save Me
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:29:25 AM AEST
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Oh me.
don't really know what to say to this except demon be gone in Jesus name, amen!
Awesome writing.
Keep writing, my friend.
Very moving and so real.
luv, huggs, faith,
emy |
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Re: Save Me
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:32:46 AM AEST
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Wow that was dark, very cool write.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Save Me
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by musicisluv7 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:36:48 AM AEST
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sounds lyk you're going thru a rough tym. you've got the stregnth to beat these memories, i'll pray for you. gr8 write!
much luv *smiles*
musicisluv7
P.S thanx 4 commentin on my poem, it means a lot to me;-) |
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Re: Save Me
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:41:45 AM AEST
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Another great write I like this one a lot I could see the images within my minds eye. You did a wounderful job Keep up the drak writes.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Save Me
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:07:33 PM AEST
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wow this is amazing!! i absolutely loved it!!! fantastic write!!
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Save Me
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 04:59:16 PM AEST
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| wow that's really really good! wonderful! i love it ^_^ and that guy...he makes me feel weak and i feel like i want him to take me... |
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