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Looking Back
Contributed by
witch_derna
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:54:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Looking back on my life,
true it's been full of strife.
Would I change anything I've done?
Not all, but yes some.
Staying with an abusive husband for one
that caused the death of an un-born son.
That was almost to much to take,
my love for him was replaced with hate.
Not having open eyes to see
a son hooked on liquor that was drowning.
If I would have heard his cry,
he wouldn't be doing prison time.
Not sooner knowing husband number two
was molesting our daughter when she was two.
If only I could have foreseen,
she wouldn't now be a troubled teen.
I believe things happen for a reason
but these I fail to see.
So much pain, so much hurt,
is it any wonder one feels desert.
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Re: Looking Back
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by inoc on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:12:57 AM AEST
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wow what a life thus far,,,sorry it was sour
I hope you find all the reasons ..why this all had to happen...
here's to a great write! |
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Re: Looking Back
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:16:48 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
this is a powerfull write.
Keep up the awesome writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Looking Back
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:43:46 AM AEST
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I didn't know about husband number one and the unborm son. But life will get better for you my love it's written in the stars above. We can't always see we won't always know but i know this I shall forever love you so.
~~LOVE DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Looking Back
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:44:52 AM AEST
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I didn't know about husband number one and the unborm son. But life will get better for you my love it's written in the stars above. We can't always see we won't always know but i know this I shall forever love you so.
~~LOVE DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Looking Back
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by Necromant on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:38:55 PM AEST
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| Oh, I'm so sorry to read about that. Yeah, sometimes words like "Things happen for a reason" and "time heals everything" or "Love heals everything" sound really hollow. They should be banned. |
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