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Laying Beside You
Contributed by
witch_derna
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:51:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm laying beside you
watching you sleep
further your eyes seem to sink.
Love, sad, and anger
are the feelings I have.
I love you so much
it's hard to watch you go
slipping further from here.
Sometimes anger is easier to feel
to cover up the fear.
Angry at you for leaving me
angry at God for taking you.
Why did He send my true love to late?
If only we had met a different date
so much pain could have been prevented.
I love being with you every second
embracing you every chance I get.
My touch on you, your touch on me
I want to lay in your arms for eternity.
Laying here with you now
I close my eyes and pray
to never forget any of our days.
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Re: Laying Beside You
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:56:26 AM AEST
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Very touching, moving write.
I pray 4 u to have the strength to get thru.
May God bless your beluved too.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Laying Beside You
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by inoc on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:15:44 AM AEST
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oh wahat a lovely write
My prayers are with both of you
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Re: Laying Beside You
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:19:08 AM AEST
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this had me in tears almost, so sad and moving *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Laying Beside You
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:54:50 AM AEST
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This is so sad and beautifuly writen, its so emotional. I love it.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Laying Beside You
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:51:46 AM AEST
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Laying Beside You is all I have search for all my days a woman to love me for me who is you.
You took my all sickness and health.
And we are together now and for all eternity.
And nothing in heaven or hell shall take that away from us.
This brought tears to my eyes to my heart to my soul.
I just want all to know my love for you shall always grow.
~~LOVE DENNIS~~ |
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