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Gone
Contributed by
positivelypurple
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:13:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It is now time to move on
The power you once had over me
Is gone.
The weakness I once possessed
Has dissolved as light unto
Darkness.
The taste of you has been erased
Along with the humiliation
I once faced.
Goodbye emptiness
Goodbye pain
Goodbye loser
Goodbye blame.
It has taken me too long to see
That never were you worthy
Of me.
Never were you deserving
Of my weeks wondering, writing,
Thinking, wishing, cursing.
Selfish man without a soul,
Good riddance now
I am finally back in control.
Copyright ©
positivelypurple
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2004-12-13 02:13:36]
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Re: Gone
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:26:01 AM AEST
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| wish i was as strong as you ........ |
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Re: Gone
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 04:00:01 AM AEST
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Wow now, this is a masterepice and triumph to.
Time for celebration for sure.
I'll never 4 get when I realized I was over my last ex.
Awesome and ya get five brite shinning stars from me.
luv, huggs, celebrate,
emy |
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Re: Gone
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:05:40 AM AEST
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Saying goodbye is a hard thing for some, but with you seem to celebrate it and thats a good thing. Great poem.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Gone
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by Black_Rose on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:32:10 PM AEST
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| I can't wait until I'm at the stage that you are. Someday hopefully, though.... Wonderful poem; it brought a little bit of hope into my world. If you can do it, then maybe I can too. |
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Re: Gone
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:12:06 PM AEST
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| Awesomne write! Moving on really does feel great. You deserve better :-) |
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