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Taken away by love......
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:51:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A silver lining has engulfed me
and tossed me into the water of the deepest sea
and yet I can still feel my body and sense my soul
Damnation no longer is wedged into my thoughts
but instead I have been released from the physical limitations place upon me
Crystals seem to glisten from within my eyes
and show you my illuminated soul
They pierce you as if they are arrows
stabbing thru your heart
and yet you feel no pain
but only pleasure as your worries have been whisked away from your troubled soul
And the reality that was is no longer
and time has no meaning
and everything that ever was is nothing
words no longer are the essence of communication
but instead the thoughts of empathy that are emitted from your inner self
beneath your flesh and mine laid a tormented soul
that has just been set free by the angels from above
and just for now everything means nothing
as i am reminded that there is no reality
and there is no real existance
only you and me
and the silver lining that has embraced us
and has shown us the right way....
.
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JennyFruFru
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2004-12-13 01:51:04]
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Re: Taken away by love......
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:58:28 AM AEST
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Very beautifull masterpeice of luv.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Taken away by love......
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by positivelypurple on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:14:55 AM AEST
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Deep...dark...and beautiful!
-Laurel |
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Re: Taken away by love......
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:58:23 PM AEST
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GIRL,THAT WAS PRETTY! BUT THEN AGAIN YOU'RE A VERY PRETTY GIRL!! IT WAS STRAIGHT TO THE HEART WITH NO END,JUST LIKE THE START OF YOU BEING MY SWEET LITTLE FRIEND!!!
Lot Of Love,
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Taken away by love......
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by abelveal on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 01:49:48 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this piece. Your description of what takes place between the subtlties of a single glance between two people was rather thought provoking. Great job, keep it up. Looking forward to your next post.
Adam |
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