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no more
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:43:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I have no more to give
this life i can no longer live
In pain
so deranged
I'm running out of reasons
I'm running out of solutions
this is far gone
to bad .. its too late
I can't be fixed
I do not feel
I cannot feel
I will not feel anymore
for you!
JENNI
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PhantomVampyress
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2004-12-13 00:43:07]
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Re: no more
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:02:35 AM AEST
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Explained very well.
I can relate.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: no more
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by karmen on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:15:28 AM AEST
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good read... you expressed what ur feeling and are probly screaming inside...
~karmen |
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Re: no more
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by girish on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:20:21 AM AEST
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I suppose this is your lost love or anything you have lost. You have much more to give. give yourself and other will give theirs, not love but help. don`t feel for one who cannot give.
girish |
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Re: no more
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:58:45 AM AEST
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| I like this.. |
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Re: no more
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:57:49 AM AEST
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written well, deep and a very strong,
*hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: no more
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by inoc on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:19:30 AM AEST
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hope things get and feel better soon
nice write
direct and to the point
cheers |
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Re: no more
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by UnlovedChild on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:35:22 PM AEST
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| General deep and strong. Very emotional . Good job |
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Re: no more
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:09:06 AM AEST
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| WOW LOTS OF PAIN. I FEEL YOU BUT THATS LIFE WE HAVE IT OR YOU DON'T |
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