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Searching
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:41:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Smiling on the outside
crying inside
lying to myself
pretending its alright
holding onto nothing
searching for the pieces to make sense
of anything around
trying to pick it all up off the ground
trying to find where I truly belong
JENNI
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PhantomVampyress
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2004-12-13 00:41:15]
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Re: Searching
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:45:28 AM AEST
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| a book you should find.....Dear mister god, this is anna......it's about this guy who finds this little girl on the streets.....it's a brilliant book.....and don't worry it's not really religious...the author is Flynn.....that's all they know about him....they don't even know if the story is true.....but it really is beautiful.....truly.... |
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Re: Searching
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:07:34 AM AEST
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Another good one. U got it going on Jenni.
Keep up the good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Searching
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by karmen on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:19:06 AM AEST
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this is a good write and i liked reading it because i really feel like that a lot... good job
~karmen |
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Re: Searching
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by DesperateSoul on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:40:10 AM AEST
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| Very Simple and very Good!! I have been searching for these pieces for so long,but i still havent given up!! Keep Writing Jenni,thats what helps get you through it and it also helps me and a million other readers realize were not alone!!! best wishes D.$ |
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Re: Searching
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:00:17 AM AEST
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another well expressed emotional poem from you Jenni, if you ever need a friend you know I am only a click away *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Searching
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by UnlovedChild on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:32:31 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem Jenni! I can relate, I often find myself doing this. Good job. |
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Re: Searching
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:14:23 PM AEST
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Good poem
We must look out from ourselves to find where we belong.
"What soever you do for one of these you do for ME" Jesus Christ
Sinned
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Re: Searching
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 06:17:09 AM AEST
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uncertainty is certainly painful..
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