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Christmas time!!!
Contributed by
karmen
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:33:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Yay is what i say,
to the Christmas holiday thats coming.
Its like waiting for the BIGGEST sundae.
Its a wonderful time of year.
Playing in the snow,
and counting down the days.
Small childrens faces with the brightest glow,
all because their ready for santa to come.
And finally when its Christmas Eve,
all kids go to sleep,
and awake to something they can't believe.
"Santa" has come.
Gifts all around the tree,
stockings stuffed to the tops.
Everyone is filled with glee,
because finally the day has come.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2004-12-13 00:33:30]
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Re: Christmas time!!!
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:42:27 AM AEST
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| I hate christmas....stupid encarnalized plastic need....makes me angry just to think about it....oh, yes...um.....as far as the writing goes...not bad....a little practice would do you well though ^_^ (i'm in a mood....being kinda blunt) |
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Re: Christmas time!!!
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:17:40 AM AEST
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You've captured the spirit of Christmas and somone jus had to be ba humbug but your poem is awesome.
Keep up the good writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Christmas time!!!
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by girish on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:24:17 AM AEST
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Only one life will soon be past
Only what`s done for god will last.
It`s time to do it for lord Christ
Do it and you will have the rest
Happy Christmas to all followers around the world.
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Re: Christmas time!!!
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:56:03 AM AEST
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| I like it! The flow is a little random but... the content itself is great =-) |
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