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Mellow Blow
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:09:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It's getting late
end of the day
time to fall back
let It go and relax,
everything Is Kool now
said what I had to say
my moment of raging
Is slowly dissapating,
Innervisions
are
soothing
I drift on a lake
floating away
ahhh
on a wave...
Illusions waver
I can see again
the wounds are healing
the scars
are all that remain,
life Is to precious
to be hiding away
there really Is no need
to be living In pain.
It's starting to rain
but that's okay
I close my eyes
open my mouth
and have a taste,
Genesis revisited
oh what a sensation
a voice moans to me
and I am filled with fascination.
Rainbow colors
exploding
love the feel
love the taste
everything Is so Kool
love to be this way,
no mad moments of raging
I'm In control once again
only sweet situations
of loving sensations,
Innervisions
are
overwhelming
I drift on a lake
floating away
ahhh
on a wave....
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-12-13 00:09:38]
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Re: Mellow Blow
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:40:48 AM AEST
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Like I said, How do u do that from rage-n-hate one minete then seemingly blissfull the next?
Awesome writing as always.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Mellow Blow
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by DesperateSoul on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:51:29 AM AEST
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AHH~! Secretwind! when will we meet???
Another excellent piece of you you shared!!! Keeep Writing Always!!! D.$ |
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Re: Mellow Blow
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:04:26 AM AEST
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| beautiful... well done |
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Re: Mellow Blow
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:01:33 AM AEST
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emotional and written beautifully :) great write Tony,
pixie xx |
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Re: Mellow Blow
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by givingin on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:10:37 AM AEST
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Great write,
loved it,
emotional.
Kiss Kiss,
love ya always,
*~givingin~* |
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