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Trying to see you as something you're not
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 11:38:00 PM in AEST
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Trying not to see you
As what you really are
Is getting really hard for me
The way you act doesn't help me
I try to tell myself you're a good person
But I can't believe it
You do things only a monster could do
But still I try
Just for one minute of every day
To see something good in you
Something no one else can
It's becomming impossible though
As day by day
You slowly become the monster I always knew you were
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Re: Trying to see you as something you're not
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by namesaretaken on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:30:46 AM AEST
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Those that are able to see good in any people are either very special or Foolish I guess it depends on your out look
I beleive its a very special gift and the world need people like that
Your poem inspired quite a lot of buried thoughts in my head Thank you
Good stuff
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Re: Trying to see you as something you're not
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:39:02 AM AEST
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I turn into a monster at night.
I told one of my exgirlfriends that, she didn't believe me.
she learned...then she dumped me.
I wish i had gotten to go to vietnam
which is totally unrelated by the way
k, bye...
^_^ abraham
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Re: Trying to see you as something you're not
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:50:18 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
Unfortunaly true in many cases.
Good writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Trying to see you as something you're not
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:04:23 AM AEST
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very good write, its easy to look at loved ones with rose tinted glasses on :( *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Trying to see you as something you're not
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by doodley_5 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:27:42 PM AEST
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| nice amber.. i like this one |
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