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torm
Contributed by
humboldthunny17
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 11:03:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The skies hold back
grey and heavy
wanting to let go of the rain that they bear
My eyes tears lack
glassy and ready
ready to let the river fall through the air
The clouds are so dreary
so big and low
lurking and causing a very dark day
My heart is not cheery
sad and alone
trying to think, to find something to say
The lightning gleams
the thunder roars
the earth turned evil in just one night
my anger means
that there are no doors
to open and shut in this personal fight
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humboldthunny17
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2004-12-12 23:03:57]
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Re: torm
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 11:29:23 PM AEST
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This is a very deep, awesome write.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: torm
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by humboldthunny17 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:31:49 PM AEST
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| It's supposed to be called Personal storm... lo siento Uds.! |
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