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Being raped
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:26:04 PM in AEST
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He has me on the bed now
He tells me not to fight it
I don't want to do this
But he pins me down and won't let go
He's forcing me to stay down
He has my hands above my head
Holding them while he rapes me
All the while I'm trying so hard not to scream
He's hurting me so much
I just want him to get off
I can't hold my screams in anymore
Let me go I cry
He's not showing any sign of giving up
STOP I scream
But he won't get off
He just keeps going
God please make him stop
Just make him get off
I can't stand this anymore
Plese make him stop
When he's finally done with me I can't move
He stares at me like I'm pathetic
Like he did nothing wrong
When it was him who did everything wrong
I'm getting better now
The dreams arn't so bad
But I'll never be able to forget that night
I'll always have the memory of it stuck in my head
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Re: Being raped
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:59:49 PM AEST
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thank God it hasn't happened to u.
Very good write u have here 'cause it never goes away and pops up up in your mind when least expected.
Keep writing.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Being raped
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:07:03 AM AEST
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I have been raped and you have expressed this well *hugs* glad that this didnt happen to you, it is a shame that so many women go through this and are too scared to report it
good writing, hard hitting
pixie xx |
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Re: Being raped
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by deepdarkthinker on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:00:59 AM AEST
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| your poem was realy good and its exactley what rape victams think while it is happening and after i should know ive been there great poem |
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Re: Being raped
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:51:37 PM AEST
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You amaze me, you really do. You express this so well, I don't get how you can do it. Your writing is the most powerful. This one is really hard for me to read though. But I enjoyed reading all of your poems...
Love You,
Britnee...
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Re: Being raped
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by Sinned on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:25:36 PM AEST
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I'm glad this wasn't a real happening with you. It's too bad it happens at all,but there is sickness of mind in this world.
Your poem covers this subject very well and it's a shame women sometimes blame themselves when it is "never--Never" their fault.
You write well.
Sinned
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