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If I Offered
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:24:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If I offered you the world-
Would you accept it from me?
If I offered you riches beyond belief-
Would you share your wealth with me?
If I offered you my eyes-
Would you then see only me?
If I offered you my hand-
Would you extend it out to me?
If I offered you my life-
Would you accept it willingly?
If I offered you my shoulder-
Would you lean on me?
If I offered you my smile-
Would you laugh with me?
If I offered you my pain-
Would you remove it from me?
If I offered you my heart-
Would you then give yours to only me?
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Re: If I Offered
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by mintylass on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:35:45 PM AEST
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| i lik this poem as it has style and i think its great.thanks for posting it here. |
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Re: If I Offered
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:12:30 PM AEST
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I can honestly say "yes" to those questions. I would all those things for the person I loved. Love is the one thing that, the more you give away the more you get in return.
This is a great poem and I too thank you for sharing it with us.
Rita |
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Re: If I Offered
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 11:45:44 PM AEST
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I wouldn't want the world, myself but this is great writing.
Big smiles,
emy |
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