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Hiding The Bruises
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:04:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Turn out the lights
I live for the night
Because no one else can see me cry
And I don't have to lie
I don't have to hide
My bruises for your pride
And I don't have to fake
That my heart doesn't break
With every punch and hit
Like I've doen something to deserve it
Another story for my friends
A lie so they won't worry
About teh way that you treat me
So bruises heal, quick, hurry!
"Just another scratch"
"We're still a perfect match"
"I got that a week ago"
Just so no one else will know
The things you put me through
The things you seem to make me do
To hurt myself a little more
Than what you did a few minutes before
Just because I was a little late
For a meeting, a dance, or a date
Another story for my friends
A lie so they won't worry
About teh way that you treat me
So bruises heal, quick, hurry!
Secrets that I'm forced to keep
And all alone I sit and weep
Because I can't tell a soul
About how, daily, you lose control
About the o*****less, pointless fights
That leave me begging for longer nights
So I won't have to hear your apologies
After you'v ebeaten me onto my knees
SO that I must constantly pray
That I'll make it through the next day
Another story for my friends
A lie so they won't worry
About teh way that you treat me
So bruises heal, quick, hurry!
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by killingmehslowly on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:08:34 PM AEST
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| Great write, very intense, i can feel the pain. I hope that you manage to get out this relationship before you get hurt anymore. No one deserves pain like that. -Sami- |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:49:38 PM AEST
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this is so sad..
who ever this person is I pray they know they are breaking the law.
Call 911 and get help before u end up like Nicole Simpson.
They have shelters that will keep u till you can get back up on your feet and mostly they protect u from the pertraitor of this awfull crime.
Forgive me for being so blunt but I do know what verbal abuse is. You may think u deserve it but like the other comment no on deserves that kindda treatment.
luv, hugg, faith, hope, strength,
emy |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:23:13 PM AEST
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Do you understand battered and abused and beaten to death? If you stay with this perverted person you will end up dead. You need to get away and get away quickly. There are people out there that will help you and get you to safety. No one deserves to be treated like this.
Rita |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:26:48 PM AEST
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| wow, such emotion, such sadness. I hope this ends for you soon, I say drop him like a bad habit, if you can. |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:47:04 PM AEST
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great write...
this is full of emotion
i hope u manage to get out of this relationship soon... before u get hurt more
great write...
hope to c more from u soon
Jishes |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:44:57 AM AEST
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great write.. i hope your friend gets help for this..
peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by DesperateSoul on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:04:51 AM AEST
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Your poem made my hair stand on end and painfilled memories come rushing in!!! I know people can say they feel like that alot,but I know from personal experience just what you are saying and where you are right now!!! I went to prison because in the end i had to try to kill to get free....... Get out while your alive!!! Your poems are your strength!!!!! Keep writing Always!! Don't loose hope!!! D.$.
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:09:37 AM AEST
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Kie-Kie that was so intense and hard hitting, a very deep and emotional write, must have been hard for you to write
*hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:25:58 PM AEST
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One word ENOUGH and mean it. I don't know if this is about you or a friend.
No matter who it is for it is time to say goodbye.
Self esteem becomes at its lowest and hey that's how they like it. The weaker you are the more control they have. The more you submit the more they feel they have the power to play you like a puppet.
Girl loose him he don't deserve love if he is abusing it. What gives anyone the right to hurt someone like this. Maybe a brother or friends should have a quite word with him man to man so to speak.
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:38:43 AM AEST
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OMG so powerful!
SO SAD!
BEAUTIFUL write....
it is very sad when you hear of people being abused by loved ones,....
If you ever wanna talk or sometin, just PM me...
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 04:23:22 AM AEST
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| wow this is really intense well done!!! |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by lovesucks on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:18:02 AM AEST
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WOW, I will pray for you too.. Your better than any man can make you feel..Please be safe.Powerful piece
Theresa |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by Scarlett on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 05:45:49 AM AEST
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that was brilliant, so powerful and direct. there's nothing else i can say that everyone else hasn't already said but that was brilliantly done!
i liked the first two lines best. |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:28:54 PM AEST
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let me put it this way... in words you'll undersand...
"ITS OUTTA HERE OVER"
POWEVERFUL |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:24:29 AM AEST
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| In another world when your away from him. The pain of knowing that you have to go home. I know how that feels. your poem touched me deeply and brought out memories. ever need to talk I am here. easy to talk to someone who has been where you are. |
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Re: Hiding The Bruises
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:29:34 PM AEST
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| I can relate all too well to that one. Very emotional, powerful. An important release of pent up emotions. I hope for your sake that situation is in your past... |
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