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who am I?
Contributed by
the_fallen
on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:20:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In a corner of a dark room, there lies the one
The shadow of your mind,
the pain in your heart,
the hatred in your eyes
I come out at night hiding in the shadows
With a knife in my hands, seeking out victims for my pain
I collect soul of the dead and feed on them
Born out of hatred, pain and regret
I live a pained life never to see the light
People go in this room,
Hehehehehehe hope they like it here
because that’s the last time they’ll enter another room
Copyright ©
the_fallen
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2004-12-12 18:20:52]
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Re: who am I?
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:30:41 PM AEST
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The dark places of ones own mind can be the only escape for some. To enter a room to which there is no escape but to write. Nice write.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: who am I?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:44:20 PM AEST
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| so many ways one could take this, but they all end in the same place, a well written poem on any level. |
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Re: who am I?
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by Apolla on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:55:21 PM AEST
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| Nicely written but the 'hehehehehe' could have been left out. |
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Re: who am I?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:30:11 PM AEST
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| This is really good I liked it alot, Very powerful and writen well, This is a great Poem ! |
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Re: who am I?
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by hot-shot on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:21:57 AM AEST
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this is really good one..i like it
hav fun & hugz
hot-shot |
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