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Contributed by
lemmen
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:46:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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The softness of the blade
as it slowly cross her neck.
She was still and lifeless
as blood began to spill.
She cried out for help
still no heard her cry.
Her eyes rolled up back
into her head.
No sign of life she was
surely dead.
He lifted her lifeless corpus
upon his shoulders.
And headed up the stairs
to the butcher block.
He laid her down like
a side of beef,
To be cut and ground.
He undress her body
and Dee skinned her to.
All because he wanted to.
He took her thigh skinned
it to the bone.
Then did the to the body whole.
He went to bed and early he rose
He made his breakfast eggs and her.
Went to work still no one knows
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
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2004-12-12 17:46:27]
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Re: BODY
(User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:21:06 PM AEST
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| Ah, my friend Lemmen (although I doubt you would consider me a friend) this was a VERY intriguing peice to me. Intersting in many different aspects. |
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Re: BODY
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:10:22 AM AEST
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| Very impressive... Dark and disturbing, but you can't help but like it. |
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Re: BODY
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:33:43 AM AEST
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Dark and fascinating. Wonder comes to mind how someone could do this. Excellent.
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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