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LIFELESS
Contributed by
lemmen
on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:27:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Lifeless bodies lay upon the
ground.
Striped of their humanity,
Like sheep ready for
slaughter.
They died one by one.
Ten's of thousands of
soul's.
Raped of their flesh,
Bodies still whole.
Death covers the land.
Those not dead yet die
from within.
As their flesh burn's from
the death around them.
Lifeless bodies lay upon the
ground.
Death as far as the eye
can see.
Life is void.
Within my mind's eye.
I can see this in the coming
day's.
May I be wrong,
May we all pray?
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
... [
2004-12-12 17:27:12]
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Re: LIFELESS
(User Rating: 1 )
by lilfletch1212 on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:07:21 PM AEST
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| Hey Dennis, great poem! Good work. Thanks for posting a comment on mine :) |
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Re: LIFELESS
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:15:37 AM AEST
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brilliant dark write Dennis great work,
pixie xx |
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Re: LIFELESS
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:15:25 AM AEST
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Excelent poem dennis. Very dark and wonderous. great poem
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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Re: LIFELESS
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:04:35 PM AEST
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fantastic dark write....i loved it....excellent job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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