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Two Sides Of The Same Person
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:58:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My mind wanders to a dark place
A place only I know of
You will not find it
Even if you tried
And I will not say
What lies beyond the barrior
Who you see and who I am
Are two differant people
I am not a happy cafe-free soul
Laughing and smiling
My heart hidden far from here
I weep and want to leave
But I show nothing but cheer and joy
This is not me
Inside I want to die
I welcome death with open arms
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2004-12-12 16:58:17]
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Re: Two Sides Of The Same Person
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:01:57 PM AEST
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| powerful write. |
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Re: Two Sides Of The Same Person
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by Apolla on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:07:25 PM AEST
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| This poem seems as if I had written it myself and I can't believe how much I can relate with this beautiful and powerful poem. I applaud you. |
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Re: Two Sides Of The Same Person
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by Gunda on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:40:27 PM AEST
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| Really good writen, and it went strigth to my heart. It felt like you had writen it abouth me. |
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Re: Two Sides Of The Same Person
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:00:12 PM AEST
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Everyone creates their own mask to hide behind. Everyone has a secret they keep lock up deep inside. Great write.
~DENNIS~ |
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