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My Poem
Contributed by
uvegotme014
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 03:43:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I love the way you move your lips
I hate the way you let everything slip
I love the way you make me feel
I hate the way it doesnt seem real
I love the way you do what you do
I hate the way you make me want you
I love the way you walk at night
I hate the way nothing is right
I love the way your in my brain
I hate the way you drive me insane
I love it when you take me off the ground
but then you dont make a sound
You take all the pain away
but then you dont look at me today
I dont get these things you do
and why do i need you
I love the way you do what you do
but you havent got a clue
I love the way you make me smile
but i guess i am gonna have to wait a while
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uvegotme014
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2004-12-12 15:43:24]
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Re: My Poem
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:27:27 PM AEST
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Hard to understand, isn't it?
I know how you feel, or have known, but I still don't understand.
Maybe, we never will.
Great write!
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: My Poem
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by Summerwine on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:30:30 PM AEST
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| I loved it, no I hated it, no I loved it...Really i did .. Enjoyed it...thx, Yvonne |
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Re: My Poem
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by hot-shot on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:27:40 AM AEST
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wow...i like it
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