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Sun

Contributed by GEQUETSCHT on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Tell me how far you wanna go
Be afraid, dont be afraid
The sun is shining out of my hands
When it breaks out of the fists
It lays hotly on the face
It can blind
It can burn you all
But the sun will not set tonight
And the world counts loudly to ten

One
Here comes the sun
Two
As mothers are screaming
Three
Men are burning
Four
Here comes the sun
Five
And everyone is waiting for it

The sun is shining out of my eyes
When it breaks out of the lids
It lays hotly on the chest
It scortches flesh and hair
It is the brightest star of them all
It will not set tonight
And the world counts loudly to ten

One
Here comes the sun
Two
As mothers are screaming
Three
Everyone is waiting for it
Four
Here comes the sun
Five
The sin is shining
It is the brightest star of them all
Six
The sun is shining
Seven
Children are lost
Eight
Mothers are screaming
Nine
The sun is shining
Ten
And it will not set tonight

The sun is shingin out of my eyes
And as it breaks out of the fists
It lays hotly on you
And It blinds and burns you
The sun will not set tonight
And the world counts loudly to ten

Copyright Â© GEQUETSCHT ... [ 2002-11-27 08:30:00]
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Re: Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 03:31:40 PM AEST
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Hmm well it's definately different
Have you ever thought of writing
song lyrics? Thanks for sharing
this one i enjoyed it alot
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonLite on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 10:27:13 PM AEST
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Very interesting and deep. I like the repetition of certain things. Good Job

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