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Noone Cares
Contributed by
socialburnin
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 02:29:13 PM in AEST
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I dont know what you want
But I guess I cant give it
Youre too caught up in the image
To taken by the flow
That you cant see that underneath
Were all the same
Pathetic and alone
Were all afraid of the world
Were all afraid to be hurt
Just some of us dont try to cover it up
With drugs or drinks or lies
Im at war with myself
Over the jealously I own
Part of me wants to let you go
But part of me wants you for my own
Neither side can win though
Cause you dont give a damn
Noone cares about anyone else
Its always about something less
There is no love, theres only sex
With lies and greed and coruption
I dont belive in anything anymore
I really wish I did
But as far as your concerned
I might as well be dead
The world is cruel and cold
And living is over rated
I dont know why I bother anymore
I dont know why I love you
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Re: Noone Cares
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 02:43:29 PM AEST
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| this is really good.. i know how ya feel |
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Re: Noone Cares
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 03:17:02 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a very very powerful write, and its true and really good, I really liked the part were you said
I dont know what you want
But I guess I cant give it
Youre too caught up in the image
To taken by the flow
That you cant see that underneath
Were all the same
Pathetic and alone
That part is so true i can relate, you are a very good writer, Great Write ~!!
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