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The Tomb Of Eros De Monte - Part 2

Contributed by Crimson_Rose on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 01:32:11 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Seif was full of pure blood,
Eros needed precisely that,
The blood of a young virgin
Eros’s evil tongue ran over his soaked lips
Thick, red liquid coursed through his archaic body
It would be, not until the welcoming night, which he would leave

The golden sun, with its ribbon waves, had soon set behind the pyramids
Eros walked the paths of his resting place,
Iridescent moonlight was shining through the opened door
He stuck his head out, and breathed the sweet, night air
His coal black locks fell in front of his gorgeous face
Dry hands touched the grainy sand; he knew was finally here

Eros rushed through the sands at ungodly speed,
His shabby, brown cloak flying behind him like a hungry vulture
Old attire has worn keenly on his skin
Eyes of shimmering gold landed upon a thriving city
It leaked of humans and crimson blood
Onward he went, his beige sandals making slight prints in the sand

The gates of the pulsing city opened,
He slowly walked past the speared gate,
At that instant, he spied a lovely victim
Her blonde hair tousled all over,
She was dancing, with her azure eyes locked on Eros
Her hips swayed, turning lust on the vampire

Eros’s lips warped into a wily smile
He beckoned her closer to him,
Her lavender scent only provoked him further
A sea of seductive whispers found her ears
Soft, butterfly kisses were planted along her neck
His fangs then revealed their lethal puncture

Blood gushed from the fatal holes in her neck
Eros held onto her waist, and roughly threw her down
He let the wind-swept sand cover her body
He observed her for any trinkets,
A glittering ruby had then caught his eye
Hastily, he slipped it off her lean finger,
Eros slowly crept back to his tomb, awaiting the dark once again

Copyright Â© Crimson_Rose ... [ 2004-12-12 13:32:11]
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Re: The Tomb Of Eros De Monte - Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by __happyhurt__ on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:22:54 PM AEST
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wow.....i want more.

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