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MadHouse
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:50:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In this madhouse people lick the walls,
They answer when the voices call,
Talk to demons that no-one else can see,
This is what my head feels like to me.
Straight jackets are the fashion here,
Everything is blurred nothing is clear,
If I take my pill the pink elephants will go,
Then I would lose my psychotic flow.
Lock me up in my padded cell,
I have already been to the real hell,
I met the devil & I shook his hand,
Laughed as he struck up his big brass band.
Elvis shares my cell we play his guitar,
The aliens communicate with me from afar,
I have tea with the mad hatter I’m away with the fairies,
I see things & laugh were as to another they’d be scary.
I am never alone in my crazy stasis,
I tend to go through these mad little phases,
I am quite alright sitting up here on my flying pig,
I once met a leprechaun & joined him in his Irish jig.
It’s like a madhouse inside my brain,
You look at me like I am completely insane,
But you are the one reading this & giggling,
If you ask me I’d said your insanity was wriggling.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-12 10:50:52]
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Re: MadHouse
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by shelby on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:54:59 AM AEST
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aq very creative poem Pixie but I dont think your insane just a great imagination(smiles)
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Re: MadHouse
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by AliB on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:57:05 AM AEST
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Brilliant pixie!!
I'll grab my straitjacket and join you, I'm sure I'll fit right in. Lmao!!!!!!
Ali xx |
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Re: MadHouse
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:57:32 AM AEST
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*giggles*
Krissie, you're a nutter!!
*loves*
How do you do it?
I wish I could write like you. *hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: MadHouse
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:58:46 AM AEST
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oh my God, oh my God, oh my God!!!! this is like every residential home/ institution i've worked in. Hope you taught elvis to play that guitar properly, give the guy his due...personality...yes...voice...yes..but playing the guitar? looked good but not really!
lol!
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Re: MadHouse
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by julieh on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 12:16:18 PM AEST
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| I loved it! excellent! |
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Re: MadHouse
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 12:44:04 PM AEST
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Lol you arnt insane Pixie you just have an over active imagination lol cool poem...one of your best another master pice form ya...beautifully written as always.
Cya
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Re: MadHouse
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by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 01:38:54 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Very funny, seems like your brain is a wreck! Keep it up ... liked this one a lot! |
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Re: MadHouse
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 03:10:46 PM AEST
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this is sooooo good nice write:)
*XoXo* |
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Re: MadHouse
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by venkat on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 11:51:33 PM AEST
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| wonderfully creative..really mad mad house..but I don't like pigs..though I like this mad girl..:-) venkat |
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Re: MadHouse
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:47:32 PM AEST
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| Pixie, this was such a delight to read. I loved it! *S* Cynthia |
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Re: MadHouse
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:36:08 AM AEST
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EXCELLENT!! It was amusing and a great write.
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 05:01:15 PM AEST
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| haha that is awesome! i loved it. great job ^-^ you are very talented. |
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