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Halfway There
Contributed by
killingmehslowly
on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:25:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As the many days pass on
I grow happy once again
But my depression is not quite gone
Once more I take up my pen
I write what I feel
Till you go and blow it
Like a drunk behind the wheel
Lose control to crash in a pit
I reach for my knife
Draw pretty designs in my arm
I won't end this life
Yet I mean to do plenty of harm
I do not bleed
I will not cry
Till once more when I do the deed
Oddly happy again, I smile and sigh
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2004-12-12 10:25:48]
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Re: Halfway There
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:45:35 PM AEST
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i liked this alot.....great job....i can relate....if u need someone to talk to PM me
Lots o fLove
CrimsonTears
PS thanks for commenting on my poem : ) |
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Re: Halfway There
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:16:14 PM AEST
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| excellent write. emotions just seem like a cycle. if only happiness lasted longer than depression in the cycle. |
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