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drunk again
Contributed by
pleasure_is_pain103
on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:00:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Here I am, drunk again
Drowning my sorrows in what might have been
Just yesterday I thought I was fine
But then I remembered that you weren't mine
So here I am, Drunk and alone
Wishing I had more beer of my own
I havent drank enough to forget why I cry
I can still remember, your love was a lie
My sadness haunts me all through the day
Another drink will make it all go away
You left me here with a broken heart
And pretty soon my liver may fall apart
Why would you do this to someone like me?
I used to be alive, so happy and free
Now I'm sad, I wish I were dead
As I lay here, hung over in bed
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Re: drunk again
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:02:42 AM AEST
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another nicely written poem... but sad :( again, best of luck to you
-Nicki |
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Re: drunk again
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:04:06 AM AEST
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very painful write, I have myself drowned my sorrows at the loss of a love
written well
pixie xx |
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Re: drunk again
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by fenriquez on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:07:03 AM AEST
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| its a good poem ive been there before but someone once told me "dont try to drown your sorrows for they know how to swim" |
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Re: drunk again
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:08:14 AM AEST
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Drowning in your sarrows. Not meaning to sound harsh. Your writes are deep and filled with emotions. With a talent such as you have I'm sure the right one will come along.
~DENNIS~ |
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