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Let Me Forget
Contributed by
pleasure_is_pain103
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:54:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All I've asked for since the day you left
was to forget every single second spent with you
forget how much I love you
forget the sweet day that i knew
Forget the sincerity in your eyes
obviously your sincerity was all a lie
forget every touch, every smile
I'll tell myself that you weren't worthwhile
I'll forget all your talk about your future with me
all my dreams of you knealing down on one knee
One day I'll forget waking up to your kiss
Maybe one day that wont be what i miss
Please dear god i just want to forget
His sweet voice when I was upset
every word he ever said
please replace it with silence instead
If I could forget every second i spent with you
every dream that you made come true
Someday I just might be ok
When I forget all of your betray...
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Re: Let Me Forget
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:59:02 AM AEST
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very deep and moving, this is written through so much pain. To be betrayed is something that I personally could not forget nor forgive, I hope one day you find peace and move on in love,
pixie xx |
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Re: Let Me Forget
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:00:04 AM AEST
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Such a sad write. Thanks for sharing. May you find the peace that you seek.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Let Me Forget
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:01:26 AM AEST
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i feel your pain in this poem, very emotional and well written... best of luck to you
-Nicki |
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Re: Let Me Forget
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:02:53 AM AEST
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omg.. this is so sad.. very deep and well written.. i hope it gets better soon.
charlotte xxx |
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Re: Let Me Forget
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by One on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:11:05 AM AEST
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| you are a gorgeous person, such a beautiful sad write |
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Re: Let Me Forget
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by Black_Rose on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 11:53:07 PM AEST
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| wow....it's as though you're writing through my exact feelings.. unfortunately, it's been ten months and six days since brian decided to leave, and i can still remember the exact sound of his laughter, the way his hand wrapped around mine, the little scar he had underneath his right eye...and the love he once had for me. I don't know where you are in this journey right now, but I can tell you that the only thing to do is to get through one minute at a time. Send me a post if you wanna talk; maybe we can help each other out! Beautiful poem. |
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Re: Let Me Forget
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by SweetRhythm on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:28:24 AM AEST
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"Truly Remarkable", touching write. Such a sad topic yet enjoyable read all the way. Your talent shines through in this one very much so. A masterpiece.
Thanks for sharing.
May I just say.....
Despite all the mermories you wish to erase, you have made great use of them & to you they give praise.
Keep writing......
Corinna |
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Re: Let Me Forget
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 09:10:08 AM AEST
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that was lovely, very sad. i'm sorry for your pain and hope that you find someone who will make you happier that this person did.
lovely poem, heartfelt and moving. |
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