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Living Dead Girl
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:47:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am the living dead girl,
I am evil in a way that’ll make your hair curl,
I am unlike any other horror that you know,
I love to watch my victims as I kill them slow.
A long time ago I was bitten,
So into my fate killing has been written,
I enjoy it so draining human life,
But I don’t need the aid of a knife.
As I bleed them almost dry I laugh.
In their fresh blood I take a bath,
Your eyes just stare into the pits of mine,
I taste your blood like a vintage wine.
It is erotic & dark to take a victim,
The look on their faces it’s so grim,
Hear their cries & hear their pleads,
I watch with delight as the wound profusely bleeds.
I dress in black to compliment my mood,
Humans to me are nothing but my food,
To live but be dead is a gift that I adore,
I love to skin you & just leave your bones, your core.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-12 07:47:14]
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Re: Living Dead Girl
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:53:35 AM AEST
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Livingggggg Deaddddd Girlllllll Great write I felt the horror written within. GREAT WRITE. I really liked this one. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Living Dead Girl
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:04:51 AM AEST
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oooh very nice! great write pixie :)
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Re: Living Dead Girl
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:04:59 AM AEST
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oooh very nice! great write pixie :)
charlotte xx |
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Re: Living Dead Girl
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by ButchCorpuz on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:46:55 AM AEST
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This poem is so dark, it could still overshadow and envelope in twilight a world with a thousand suns. Nice poem!
-Butch |
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Re: Living Dead Girl
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 09:08:49 AM AEST
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an interesting poem... so dark... nicely done
my favorite part was this
Your eyes just stare into the pits of mine,
I taste your blood like a vintage wine.
keep up the good work
-Nicki |
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Re: Living Dead Girl
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:03:10 AM AEST
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pix this is brilliant! but you aint quite right me dear! lol!
johnny. |
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Re: Living Dead Girl
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by killingmehslowly on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 10:31:28 AM AEST
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| brilliant i love it. the poem just flows and being such the morbid person i am i love how dark the poem is. |
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Re: Living Dead Girl
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 02:03:39 PM AEST
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| the title got me first since i love rob zombie..but anyhow i love this poem..perfect |
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Re: Living Dead Girl
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by Angelic_Demon on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:32:42 AM AEST
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Ahh! Love it. Man, I should check out poetry more often, almost missed this one. *rolls her eyes at herself*
It was very dark. Gotta love it. :D |
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Re: Living Dead Girl
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 05:50:17 PM AEST
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| oooo I'm scared. I'm almost shaking in my boots. lol NOT. Nah, just kidding. This was a great dark write. Excellent work Pixie. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Living Dead Girl
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:11:50 AM AEST
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| Very dark and lovely! I love it. |
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