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Can't forget her
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 02:23:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She talked to me
After all these weeks
She finally asked how I was doing
I seen her picture
Still as beautiful as ever
Old thoughts and memories rushing in
Almost more then I can handle
A tear forms in my eye
My heartaches like it never healed
My heart crushing thinking about the way she is
How did I fall in love with her
Maybe it was her personality
That sure is enough for me
Not for her though
Is there such a thing as true love
I'd like someone to prove it
I miss her still
Someone needs to take her place
I just can't forget her
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Re: Can't forget her
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by holy on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 03:08:57 AM AEST
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| Let bright memory stay in heart, became it since already yesterday of eternity, in fact, bright thing always deep and eternal, follow every day when we grew up. |
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Re: Can't forget her
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 04:02:23 AM AEST
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| this is so sad, but beautifully written. hang in there though. i know it's a cliche, but everything happens for a reason and time heals all wounds. :-) |
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Re: Can't forget her
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:06:24 AM AEST
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hoppe that time will be a great healer for you, this was written with so much emotion and feeling, great expresseion of a love lost and grealty missed
pixie xx |
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Re: Can't forget her
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by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:42:49 AM AEST
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| Short and sweet. Was a really beautiful poem |
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Re: Can't forget her
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:46:13 AM AEST
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Ouch....this one hit me hard. Memories flood back.......
Very well done
Barkeep!
Larry |
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Re: Can't forget her
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by Deathly_Rose on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 05:46:15 PM AEST
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wow this was a very good write !
She sounds like she meant a lot to you, I hope that you find somebody to fill that empty space...
I hate the feeling of being lonely... yet I cant come to part with having the freedom...
*~Alicia~* |
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