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endless fighting instead of uniting
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 01:15:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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don't break my heart, don't break my soul,
look into these deep grey eyes,
remember how it felt when you loved me,
don't break my heart don't break my soul
pull me close like you want to
not because you know i'll cry if you don't
tell me what you WANT to do,
don't just do what you know I want you to do..
never forget all that you mean to me,
there are many times when i would rather you beat me
then for you to leave me alone,
but many times that you know you should
that you should just smack me
and open these eyes so i can see,
that you really do love me
just make things right for us tonight
because i'm tired of the fussing and fighting
when it comes time for us to be uniting
it always seems that we are fighting,
but i guess one day we will get it right,
but till then are you up for the fight?
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Re: endless fighting instead of uniting
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 01:23:29 AM AEST
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Very good write. Luv your sense of humor.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: endless fighting instead of uniting
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by AnastasiaN on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 01:44:17 AM AEST
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| i love your poem, i know exactly how you feel. thank you for sharing. |
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Re: endless fighting instead of uniting
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 02:26:21 AM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: endless fighting instead of uniting
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:09:00 AM AEST
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great write, thanks for sharing,
pixie xx |
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