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Alone
Contributed by
Black_Rose
on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 09:20:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I find myself alone again,
Wondering where you are
And what it is you're doing
And if your heart is scarred.
And do you ever think of us?
Do you ever cry?
Do you ever mourn the loss
Of my love which you've passed by?
Or have you already forgotten me?
And has your heart moved on?
And how can you truly believe
That our love is wrong?
You said you could not let yourself
Be with me once more.
You would not be responsible
In case my heart was torn.
But if you were to stand before me
And look me in the eye,
You would see you have not spared me;
Instead, my heart has died.
So once again I'm sitting here
Suppressing thoughts of you,
And trying to hold on to life
Though my worst fear has come true.
Copyright ©
Black_Rose
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2004-12-11 21:20:01]
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Re: Alone
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 09:42:07 PM AEST
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Aww this is so sad, great write btw, n cheer up im shur u'll find another soon if u havent alredy:)
Jenni xxoo |
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Re: Alone
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by Rxqueen on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 03:06:32 AM AEST
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| Aw how sad and touching. I know the feeling, it is so hard. You just sit there and think yourself to death about what they are thinking... It is crazy. I hope you get through this, I knwo you will. Love hurts... Good write. |
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Re: Alone
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by pleasure_is_pain103 on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:24:33 AM AEST
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| i really love this poem, it made tears come to my eyes. I hope things work out for you, it always does in the end. |
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Re: Alone
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by lionels on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:10:54 PM AEST
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| Very good poet. I like that poem. |
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